CL Compo formats + 好词好句

Question 1

私人电邮 format

Answer 1

主题：回复：（抄题）
伟明：（swap the name from the brief)
xx你好吗？我很好，只是最近太忙了。今天写这封电邮给你的目的是与你分享。。。

xx(copy background info)

xx接下来，让我。。（transition sentence)

4 x body paragraph

xx我就写到这里了，希望早日收到你的回复，并与我分 享你的看法。再见！
xx祝好！
(leave a line)
小明

Question 2

公务电邮 format

Answer 2

主题：反映对。。。并提出改善建议
王（first name of 收件人）经理 (position/status):
xx你好！我是居住在。。的居民，小明。今天写这封电邮给你的目的是想反映。。。

xx(copy background info)

2 para + 影响 （think very systematically e.g. a->b->c)

xx接下来，我有以下几个建议供您参考。（transition sentence)

2 建议

素问王经理您从善如流，办事效率高，也很关心。。的福利。因此希望您能采纳我的建议，尽快处理这件事。谢谢！

小明启

Question 3

材料作文 format

Answer 3

1.写人 or 2. 写事 (note in some cases, the question can allow you to write either way)

写人

开头：抄题

3 body paragraphs to answer 3 diff. requirements from qn

conclusion

写事

开头：抄题

3 body para （起因，经过，结果 if e.g. qn allows you to describe a fight between you and your friends)

conclusion->your thoughts （感想）

Question 4

议论作文 format

Answer 4

开头

3 body para on either 赞同 or 不赞同 （can use compare and contrast and examples)

conclusion

Question 5

情景作文 format

Answer 5

a narrative story format (make sure the intro, body paragraphs and conclusion meet all 3 or 4 requirements in qn)

plan which paragraph answers which requirement

Question 6

felt touched/warmth

Answer 6

此时，我觉得有一股暖流通过我的全身。

Question 7

embarrassed

Answer 7

我的脸顿时由白变红了。

Question 8

it’s over!, it’s over!

Answer 8

完了,完了，。。。

Question 9

suddenly, I came up with an idea,..

Answer 9

突然，我灵机一动，想起。。

Question 10

he then explained to me

Answer 10

他才向我解释：“。。。”

Question 11

uncertainty/worry in one’s eyes

Answer 11

忐忑不安的眼神

Question 12

I bowed, sincerely apologised to （someone）

Answer 12

我弯着腰，诚心诚意向—道歉。

Question 13

work together

Answer 13

分工合作

Question 14

improve friendships

Answer 14

增进友谊

Question 15

through posters

Answer 15

通过张贴海报

Question 16

tell

Answer 16

告诉

Question 17

remind

Answer 17

提醒

Question 18

community club

Answer 18

民众俱乐部

Question 19

create some courses

Answer 19

开办一些课程

Question 20

music, dance and computer lessons

Answer 20

音乐课，舞蹈课，电脑课

Question 21

besides，。。

Answer 21

此外 or 另外

Question 22

arrange

Answer 22

安排

Question 23

participate in volunteer work

Answer 23

参加社区服务活动

Question 24

caught my attention

Answer 24

吸引住我的目光

Question 25

grades are far from expectation

Answer 25

成绩很不理想

Question 26

otherwise

Answer 26

否则

Question 27

finally, I courageously told the truth in detail

Answer 27

我终于鼓起勇气把事情的来龙去脉一五一十地坦白告诉了他。

Question 28

“you ah，。。“

Answer 28

“你呀，。。”

Question 29

invest a lot of precious time into helping me revise

Answer 29

抽出了宝贵的时间帮我复习

Question 30

can’t wait to / very excited to..

Answer 30

迫不及待地想

Question 31

some。。。，some。。。，and some …

Answer 31

有的。。，有些。。。，还有些

Question 32

turned my body

Answer 32

转过身，。。

Question 33

a more than 70 yrs old granny

Answer 33

一位年过七十岁的老婆婆

Question 34

in a serious and mature tone， said。。

Answer 34

语重心长地对我说

Question 35

i believe that

Answer 35

我相信。。

Question 36

released from school intro

Answer 36

“铃。。。铃。。。” 等待已久的放学铃声终于响了，同学们一窝蜂地冲出校门。我拖着沉重的脚步走回家。

Question 37

continued to say

Answer 37

继续说：

Question 39

Hurt reputation

Answer 39

声誉受损

Question 40

Not only that

Answer 40

不仅如此，