Comparison

Question 1

She sleeps up in the attic there
Alone, poor maid […] her eyes, her hair, her hair

Vee stare past di half-price window signs (at di beaches ov di UK in di) brightey moon

Answer 1

SS- ‘vee’=we. They are together
TFB- distance ‘alone’
- she sleeps in the attic, not with her husband
TFB- possessive ‘her eyes, her hair, her hair’
SS- Romantic ‘brightey moon’

Question 2

but more’s to do
A harvest-time than bide and woo

after vee hav made luv like vee rowing through Putney

Answer 2

TFB- neglects the bride
SA- they are together
TFB- can’t be bothered with trying to entertain the bride
SS- Humours simile