From Taking On The World COPY Flashcards
She is alone on Christmas Eve
Creates sympathy for her and “Christmas Eve” emphasises the loneliness
“As if I was stepping on to the moon - a world over which I had no control”
Builds tension and shows how dangerous is was
“Haylard” “sheet” “reef” “jumar” “spreader”
Lots of semantic field vocabulary shows how she is very capable and knows what she’s doing
“There would be no second climb on this one”
Builds tension and anticipation
“Mast slices erratically”
Dynamic verb –> descriptive and builds tension
“Tugged and tugged”
Repetition for emphasis
Shows how desperate she is for this to work
Builds tension
“Not far now, kiddo”
Trying to steady her nerves and encourage herself
“I had my heart in my mouth”
Metaphorical idiom shows to the audience the danger of the situation
Tension
“It’s far from over …”
Ellipsis builds tension as the reader does not know what is going to happen next
Suspense
“My head was spinning, but I felt like a million dollars”
Idiom “felt like a million dollars”
Shows how proud she is of herself
“I would be wearing a helmet”
Remarkably sensible and takes the appropriate precautions
“I had agonised for hours”
“Worked through the night preparing for it”
She is a perfectionist and has clearly thought long and hard about the climb
“When it got light o decided that the time was right”
She is systematic and considers the need for maximum daylight
“I couldn’t feel my fingers - I’d need gloves”
She is not perfect as she fails to fully appreciate the cold so has to start again
“Clinging on”
Shows how dangerous it is
Shows she is physically strong as she is able to do this
