MRS MIDAS POETRY ANALYSIS Flashcards
“It was late September”
- immediately creates a setting
-you can imagine golden leaves on the ground.
“I’d just poured a glass of wine, began to unwind, as the vegetables cooked” -
-stereotypical role of a housewife and she is enjoying that.
-She is relaxed, calm and happy.
-Enjoying ordinary house work.
“The kitchen filled with the smell of itself, relaxed”
- imagery which shows that it is domestic bliss as all is going well.
-A positive setting.
-Relaxed w/c shows emotion
“Its steamy breath gently blanching the windows” -
-Gently makes us think of a calm atmosphere.
-Windows steaming suggests that their relationship is positive.
“then with my fingers wiped the other’s glass like a brow” -
-wiping someone’s brow is a comforting and romantic gesture
-suggesting the relationship is good.
-Setting reflects their relationship.
“He was standing under the pear tree snapping a twig”
- snapping is a violent action.
-Onomatopoeia suggests he is destructive and somewhat harsh. - A contrast of harsh sounds to the gentle words in earlier lines.
“Now the garden was long and visibility poor” -
-begins with a change of event.
-Makes it mysterious as she cannot see.
“The way the dark of the ground seems to drink the light of the sky” -
-drinking the light of the sky is vampire-like as it is consuming the light leaving it in darkness.
-Associate this with something evil and sinister.
-Atmosphere is changing and it’s beginning to become evil.
“But that twig in his hand was gold” -
sense of confusion as she doesnt understand.
We are doubting it is actual gold.
“And then he plucked a pear from the branch” -
see how he has control over nature as w/c of plucking suggests he killed it.
“We grew Fondante d’Automne” -
- a variety of pear is her showing off that they are wealthy and that they can grow fancy pears.
-Parenthesis as she wants the reader to know how wealthy they are.
“And it sat in his palm like a lightbulb” -
-Simile. Example of humour.
-Makes us think that he is powerful as he can kill a pear with his power despite it being a living thing.
“On.” -
-Short sentence adds dramatic effect.
“I thought to myself, is he putting fairy lights on the tree?” -
- the question echoes her confusion.
-Fairlights suggests celebration so she is confused and is not understanding his power and the seriousness of the situation.
“The door knobs gleamed” -
Gleamed has a connotations of benign golden and positive.
“He sat in that chair like a king on a burnished throne.” -
-image of him acting powerful and in control. -Burnished again golden.
-Shows his complete power over her as he is a king
“The look on his face was strange, wild, vain.” -
-List emphasises the scale and variety of how much he has changed since she last saw him.
-Strange = she doesnt recognise her own husband, she doesn’t understand what’s going on.
-Wild = out of control and dangerous and inhuman.
-Vain = full of himself.
-All really negative adjectives. Explains her fear.
What in the name of God is going on?
- question illustrates her confusion.
-Mentioning god as what is happening is unnatural and he is also acting like a god.
-Proves she doesn’t understand.
“He started to laugh ‘’ -
- sounds cruel as he is taking her confusion as something funny.
-He is hysterical and cruel to her.
-Not the husband that she knows/loves.
-Begin to see the relationship going down as he is finding her pain and confusion funny.
“For starters, corn on the cob” -
it is unusual to have this as a starter which emphasises how unusual the situation is. Everything is really strange.
“Within seconds he was spitting out the teeth of the rich” -
-Reminds us of his power.
-Golden teeth remind us of the rich.
-Usually something we boast about but now a sign of frustration as he cannot eat.
-“Within seconds” - shows how sudden and adds dramatic effect.
“He toyed with his spoon, then mine, then with the knives, the forks.”
- toyed suggests he is playing with the utensils as he cannot eat or enjoy his food.
“I poured with a shaking hand,”
- the word shaking implies she is terrified of him and his power.
-Emphasises her terror and fear.
“a fragrant, bone-dry white from Italy,”
- more boasting and reminding us of the wealth.
“then watched as he picked up the glass, goblet, golden chalice, drank.”
- as he picks up the wine the ordinary glass turns to gold again.
-Reminds her of a goblet which suggests a king with power and control.
-Golden chalice reminds us of something holy. Has a god-like power.
-Alliteration of g is harsh and slows down the rhythm.
-Conveys a harsh truth that he cannot drink.
It was then I started to scream -
-narrative sense adds drama.
-Screaming implies that the cannot control her emotions as she is scared and angry at the same time.
-Suggests she is really upset.