MRS TILSCHERS CLASS POETRY ANALYSIS Flashcards
You could travel up the Blue Nile with your finger -
-you/your addresses the reader and involves us. -Image of travelling makes it feel like an adventure suggesting that the pupils love the class.
-Blue is appealing to our sight and tracing appealing to touch.
Mrs Tilscher chanted the scenery -
-Implies she is singing and it is exciting.
-She has a musical voice and it is nice to listen to her. Appeals to sound
That for an hour, then a skittle of milk -
skittle reminds us of bowling suggesting the class is full of games,
-it’s playful and fun to be there. (image)
The chalky Pyramids rubbed into dust. -
magical classroom and sense of setting
A window opened with a long pole -
creates sense of historic setting
The laugh of a bell swung by a running child -
-image. Child is so happy and everyone is enjoying themselves.
- the bell is happy.
-Class is full of happiness and an overall great place to be.
This was better than home
- short sentence emphasises how much the children enjoy being in the class and they want to be there.
Enthralling books -
minor sentences emphasises how fascinating it is to be there and everything they do is interesting.
The classroom glowed like a sweet shop. -
image.
-Appeals to sense of sight and taste. Just as a sweet shop is colourful and where kids want to be, so too are kids wanting to be there and attractive for children.
Sugar paper. Coloured shapes. -
-Minor sentences. Emphaiseses how attractive the class is as its bright and colourful.
-Sugar paper reminds us of something sweet and bright.
Brady and Hindley faded, like the faint, uneasy smudge of a mistake -
dark contrast.
-All the horror of the outside is gone.
-Smudge suggests the fears are not completely gone, the knowledge of the sad outside world still there.
Mrs Tilscher loved you. -
short sentnces emphasise the relationship. Caring and feeling valued.
Some mornings, you found she’d left a good gold star by your name.
GG alliteration emphasises the pleasure and excitement they get when being rewarded.
The scent of a pencil slowly, carefully, shaved. -
sense of smell.
-Helps us remember what a classroom setting was like.
-Commas slow the pace and show the care that the kids take
The inky tadpoles changed from commas into exclamation marks -
image. Mixed metaphor compares how tadpoles become frogs and the same way a comma is small and exclamation mark is tall.
-Image suggests they are getting physically bigger. Echoes the physical change in the child. Exclamation mark suggests shock.