Ch 19 - Revising and Editing for Usability Flashcards

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What are the four levels of editing?

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  • Revising
  • Substantive editing
  • Copy editing
  • Proofreading
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What is the focus of revising a draft?

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Try and see document from variety of perspectives. Review:

  • Subject
  • Purpose
  • Readers
  • Context
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What is the focus for a substantive edit?

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  • Content
  • Organization
  • Design
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What is the focus of copyediting?

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Review the sentences, paragraphs, headings, and graphics.

  • Concentrate on improving style and consistency.
  • Ensure headings and graphics are appropriate and accurate.
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What is document cycling and usability testing?

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Cycling - passing document among coworkers for feedback
Usability Testing - uses actual readers and can use informal or formal methods:
* Can they find it? (read and locate)
* Can they understand it? (understandability test)
* Can they do it? (performance test)
* Is it safe? (safety tests)

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In copyediting, name four things to check at the paragraph level.

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  • Clear topic sentence and enough support to back it up
  • Need a transitional sentence at beginning or point sentence at end?
  • Subjects aligned, or would given/new help?
  • Transitions or transitional phrases needed between sentences?
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In copyediting, name three things to check at the headings level.

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  • Properly reflects text that follows
  • Enables document scanning
  • Demonstrates clear structure and importance levels
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While revising, name three things to check at the subject level.

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  • How has subject changed/evolved?
  • Has the scope changed?
  • Has the document strayed from the subject?
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While revising, name three things to check at the purpose level.

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  • Where in document is purpose achieved?
  • Has purpose narrowed or broadened?
  • If it’s changed, what adjustments are needed?
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While revising, name three things to check at the readers’ level.

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  • Additional need-to-know info needed to make a decision?
  • Where are values and attitudes not addressed?
  • Can the needs of secondary, tertiary, gatekeepers be better addressed?
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While revising, name three things to check at the context of use level.

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  • How will document look in different media/screen sizes?
  • Do any reader economic limitations or ethical issues impact the document?
  • How can respond better to personal, corporate, industry related issues that shape readers understanding?
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While revising, name three things to check at the context of use level.

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  • How will document look in different media/screen sizes?
  • Do any reader economic limitations or ethical issues impact the document?
  • How can respond better to personal, corporate, industry related issues that shape readers understanding?
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During substantive edit, name three things to check at the content level.

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Look for gaps or digressions.

  • What additional facts, data, examples, proofs, or graphics fill the gap?
  • Is more research needed to support points?
  • Is any information included that’s not needed to make a decision?
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During substantive edit, name two things to check at the organization level.

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  • Conforms to genre (unless helpful in achieving purpose)

* Has identifiable introduction, body, & conclusion

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During substantive edit, name two things to check at the organization level.

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  • Conforms to genre (unless helpful in achieving purpose)

* Has identifiable introduction, body, & conclusion

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During substantive edit, name five things to check at the design level.

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Does page layout and graphics enhance readability?

  • How can text be made more readable for situations and places where people will use it?
  • Can design better reflect readers’ values and attitudes?
  • Does it properly reflect the five design principles: balance, alignment, grouping, consistency, and contrast?
  • Do titles and subheads best signal purpose and structure of document?
  • Do graphics support text and clarify difficult points?
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What is the focus for proofreading?

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  • Grammar
  • Spelling
  • Punctuation
  • Word usage
18
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What is a comma splice?

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Two or more distinct sentences joined only by a comma.

19
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What is a run-on sentence

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Sentence composed of two or more distinct sentences

20
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What is a sentence fragment?

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Incomplete sentence, usually missing a subject or a verb.

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What is a dangling modifier?

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A modifier (usually in an introductory phrase) implies a different subject than the one in the sentence’s subject slot.

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What is a subject-verb disagreement

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A singular or plural subject does not agree with the verb form.

23
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How are apostrophes and commas usually misused?

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apostrophes - confusing possessive and contractions

commas - adding unnecessary pauses

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What is a pronoun-antecedent disagreement?

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A pronoun doesn’t agree with noun used earlier in sentence.

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What is faulty parallelism?

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A list of items is not parallel in structure

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What is pronoun case error

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The case of a pronoun is incorrect - usually due to confusion between “I” or “me”.

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What is shifted tense?

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Sentences inconsistently use past, present, and future tenses.

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What is a vague pronoun?

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Unclear what the pronoun refers to.

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What are items to consider when editing for transcultural readers?

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  • Use short, direct sentences that follow subject, verb, object order.
  • Use positive sentences and minimize negative ones.
  • Use a limited set of words
  • Avoid humor/jokes
  • Minimize jargon/slang
  • Check sayings, cliches and idioms
  • Avoid obvious metaphors
  • Check slogans
  • Check product names
  • Use a test reader from the target culture