A Sense of Style Flashcards
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Style
Effective Use of Words to engage the mind
To become a better writer
read great writers, reverse engineer how they produced that effect.
Good writing starts strong
Not with cliche or banality, but with something that provokes curiosity
Varied Writing
Studies of writing quality, a varied vocal and the use of unusual words were two features that distinguish sprightly prose from mush.
Writer like Cinematographer
A writer, like a cinematographer, manipulates there viewer’s perspective on an ongoing story—deliberate use of transitions —colons, dashes, block quotations, can help create lively prose.
Best word choice
The best words pinpoint an idea better than an alternative, but echo it in its sound and articulation, the meaning of the word.
Advanced Word Choice
Don’t be afraid to send a reader tothe dictionary, just reign in the use of standout wordstightly, and make sure they are well earned.
Avoid Abstractions
The habit of submerging the individual into abstraction leads to lack of understanding and frustration.
Typists wanting to work in an office— not denial of economic opportunities
Stylish Writing Summary
Fresh wording and concrete imagery over abstract summary and cliche, an attention to the reader’s vantage point and the target of their gaze, the judicious placement of an uncommon word or idiom against the backdrop of simple nouns and verbs, use ofparallel syntax, the occasional planned surprise, the presentation of a telling detail that obviates an explicit pronouncement, the use ofmeter and sound to resonate with meaning and mood.
They write as if they have something important to show.
Guiding metaphor of Classic Style
the writer can see something the reader has not yet noticed, and he orients the reader’s gaze so that she can see it for herself. Seeingthe world. Purpose of writing is presentation, motive is disinterested truth.
Success in Classic Style
It succeeds when it aligns language with truth, the proof of success being clarity and simplicity. Classic prose: no need to argue for the truth, justpresent it.
Classic Style is
concrete and cooperative—refers to the world around reader in clear terms, and trusts the reader to connect the dotswithout bloated explanation.
Classic style is not
obvious— the writer has worked hard to find something worth showing and the perfect vantage point from which to see it.
When you cannot avoid Abstract concepts
attempt to explain them as if they were objects and forces that would be recognizable to anyone standing in a position to see them.
Classic writing makes a reader feel
Like a genius, with its assumption of equality between writer and reader. Bad writing makes the reader feel like a dunce.
Good writers avoid difficulty
don’t flout the difficulty of acquiring knowledge orthe imperfect models we see the world through, they artfully conceal it for clarity’s sake.
Goal of Classic Style
is to make it seem as though the writer’s thoughts were fully formed before he clothed them in words.
Table of Content Preview
Previews that read like a table of contents are there to help the writer not the reader. Those terms mean nothing to the reader and they can’t keep them in their mind for long.
How to frame information in Classic Style
Good writing takes advantage of a reader’s expectations, it accompanies the reader on the journey, or arranges the material in a logical sequence or narrative arc.
Use of Signposts in Classic Style
The art of classic prose is to signpost sparingly, as in conversation, and with a minimum of discourse. One way to introduce a topic is to open with a question. Or treat the content in a passage of writing as if its happening in the real worldand can be seen with one’s eyeballs.
Including the reader in the endeavour: let’s begin with proper names. Mow that we have explored the jungle… let us
this chap discusses the factors that cause names to rise and fall in popularity vs. what makes a name rise and fall in popularity?
Signposting
I’mgoing to tell you somethings. The first thing I’m going to tell you is that a beaver is under your feet.
The Summary
should not be copying sentences from every other paragraph and pasting it at the end. The summary should be self contained, acoherentpassage of prose in its own right. should stand alone as if the material being summarized had never existed
compulsive hedging
almost, apparently, comparatively, fairly, in part, nearly, partially, predominantly, presumably, rather, relatively, seemingly, so to speak, somewhat, sort of, to a certain degree, to som extent, i would argue.
When necessary, instead of hedging, qualify
spell out the circumstances in which the statement does not hold, rather than leave your self waffling room as to the true meaning of the word.