Anthology poetry- quotes and techniques Flashcards
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Walking Away
“like a ———/ Wrenched from its —–, go ——– away”
1) satellite 2) orbit 3) drifting
. Presents the child as attached to/dependant on parent
. Conveys a child disappearing from the care and watch of a parent, lost in space and darkness. Parent is afraid that the child will be hurt on their journey to independence.
. CA- ‘wrenched’- violent verb produced imagery of pain which shows how painful growing up is for both parent and child
. Images of separation
. Metaphor
Walking Away
“a ———— thing set free into a ———-, … one who finds no —- where the path should be”
1) half-fledged 2) wilderness 3) path
. natural imagery- natural for separation between parent and child as child grows up
. CA- ‘half-fledged’- presents child as a baby bird. This emphasises how they’re still growing and their vulnerability.
. CA- ‘wilderness’- highlights danger of child separating from parents. Unknown may be ‘predators’ who will hurt child.
. Child might ‘lose their way’ as there’s ‘no path’ - no way to go through life without getting hurt and making mistakes sometimes.
Walking Away
“—- is proved in the ——- go”
1) love 2) letting
. Last line of poem- Parent speaker accepts that growing up and parent-child separating is a natural part of life and is a loving act as it lets their child develop their own independence and sense of self.
Walking Away- to achieve higher marks
Explore movement in the poem:
Initial separation (physical and emotional)
Emotional turbulence imagery (satellite, winged seed)
Acceptance and growth (philosophical ending)
Religious imagery:
“God alone could perfectly show”- child growing into independence not only a natural thing but also part of the sacred circle of life.
Echoes the story of God letting Jesus go into the world, sense of sacrifice— the pain of love means sometimes giving freedom.
Walking Away- key structural features
. Repetition of ‘walking away’; ‘path’
“walking” emphasizes the emotional and physical act of letting go
“path” represents the life journey — predetermined and inevitable- A necessary part of life, though painful.
. rhyme scheme- very steady
reflects the steadiness of the father’s love
What poems can you compare WA to?
Mother, Any Distance- (S) Separation, independence, love. (D) Child’s POV, more tension
Follower- Growing up, family roles, movement (S). (D) Focus on admiration/burden
Before You Were Mine- (S) Time, parental identity. (D) Less about letting go
Eden Rock- (S) Spirituality, connection. (D) Implied afterlife, death
Key themes of Walking Away
Family
Growing up
Memory
Climbing my Grandfather
“——-/ the slow —– of his good ——”
1) knowing 2) pulse 3) heart
. At the end of the poem
. The word “knowing” suggests a deep, personal understanding rather than a superficial observation. The speaker is not just physically close to the grandfather but emotionally connected.
. The “slow pulse” conveys calmness, steadiness, and perhaps age — it reflects the grandfather’s composed and gentle nature.
. “His good heart” metaphorical — referencing his moral character. The adjective “good” affirms the grandfather’s kindness and integrity.
Climbing my Grandfather
“I ——– the glassy ridge of a —-, place my feet —— in the old stitches”
1) discover 2) scar 3) gently
. The “scar” could be symbolic of the grandfather’s life experiences, struggles, or emotional wounds.
. The line “place my feet gently in the old stitches” conveys a sense of care and reverence. The speaker is not stepping over or ignoring the scar; he’s acknowledging and engaging with it, delicately
This suggests an effort to understand the grandfather’s past, including pain and trauma, without disturbing or disrespecting it
. The imagery is surgical and delicate, adding to the sense of intimacy and emotional weight of the interaction
Key themes in CmG?
Family relationships, independence, admiration
Key language features in CmG?
Extended metaphor (to achieve higher marks)
. Extended metaphor of climbing- ‘without a rope or net’. ‘(soft and white/at this altitude)’. Presents how getting to know the grandfather and nurture a closer relationship is a challenging. AI- Grandfather’s life/stories are awe-inspiring like the view from the summit of a mountain.
. The idea of climbing without safety gear suggests trust — the speaker relies entirely on his grandfather, much like a climber relies on the rock face.
Key language features in CmG?
Imagery of nature
. ‘like warm ice’
. ‘watching clouds and birds circle’
This transforms the act of remembering or understanding the grandfather into a physical, almost spiritual ascent — mirroring the awe and reverence one feels in nature.
Key structural features in CmG?
Enjambment:
Creates a flow which mimics the winding path up a mountain.
Unrhymed; caesura used throughout:
Could suggest distance in relationship.
Ends with a positive comment:
Reflection on their overall positive relationship
Context for CmG?
Waterhouse = keen environmentalist campaigner who also wrote walking guidebooks. His interest in the natural world probably inspired the mountaineering theme of this poem.
What poem can we compare CmG with?
Follower- (S) Admiration of a male figure Role models, memory, physical imagery
Walking Away- (S) Parent-child emotional shifts
Growing up, independence
Mother, Any Distance- (S) Moving away from a parent figure
Emotional distance vs. closeness
Eden Rock- (S) Remembering family and loss Nostalgia, tenderness, reflection
Key themes of Eden Rock?
Family
Memory
Distance
Eden Rock
“The sky ——- as if — by three —-“
1) whitens 2) lit 3) suns
. Contributes to a tone of serenity and surreal beauty. The surreal image of three suns creates a sense of awe and wonder, reinforcing the idea that Eden Rock is a place beyond ordinary experience — a peaceful vision or memory.
“The sky whitens”:
The bright light imagery suggests a shift in atmosphere — possibly a transition from the physical world to a spiritual or transcendent one. White is often associated with purity, peace, or the afterlife.
“As if lit by three suns”:
This is a striking simile. One sun is natural, but three implies something supernatural or otherworldly. The “three suns” may symbolize the three figures central to the poem — the speaker, his mother, and his father — emphasizing unity or reunion in an imagined or spiritual realm. Could also link to the Trinity; presents the realm of Eden rock as a heavenly afterlife with benevolent gods looking after the speaker.
Eden Rock
“They —– to me from the —– —-“
1) beckon 2) other 3) bank
“They beckon to me”:
. The speaker’s parents are inviting or calling him over
. CA- verb ‘beckon’ suggests a gentle, loving gesture — not forceful, but welcoming, almost comforting.
“From the other bank”:
. The “other bank” is a metaphor for the divide between life and death
. Rivers often symbolize the boundary between the earthly and spiritual realms in literature (e.g., the River Styx in Greek mythology). So this phrase likely represents the parents existing in an afterlife or spiritual realm, calling the speaker to join them.
Eden Rock- analysis of title
“Eden” (Spiritual, ethereal) and “Rock” (Earthly, solid):
The pairing of these two words creates a tension or blend between the spiritual (Garden of Eden; state of perfection that will never be achieved again- yearning for past) and the physical, much like the poem itself. It exists at the boundary between life and death, memory and reality.
Eden Rock
“pours — from a ——-“
“a —-/ of —– for a —-“
1) tea 2) Thermos
1) screw 2) paper 3) cork
. Ordinary details from speaker’s childhood presents a sense of nostalgia
Key structural features in ER?
Caesura
Lots of pauses create a slow pace, adding to the sense of peace and tranquillity.
Gentle rhythm
Creates a sense of peace and tranquillity.
Final line
Separated from the rest of the stanza- could show speaker’s distance from his parents.
ER context?
Causley wrote this poem as an old man. Could be understood as both a memory of a lovely day and a look ahead to his own death.
Causley’s father died when he was 7 due to a lung condition cause by fighting in WW1 trenches- poem could be a presentation of one of the few beautiful memories he has with his father and a longing to be reunited as a family after a long time apart.
What poems can we compare ER to?
Walking Away- (S) Parent-child, memory, emotional shift. (D)About growing up, not death
Follower- (S)Parental admiration, memory (D)Focus on physical vs. spiritual
Before You Were Mine- (S) Parent-child, memory, loss. (D) Mother’s life before child
Neutral Tones- (S) Loss, reflection. (D) Bitterness vs. peace
Key themes in Follower?
Family, getting older, nature