Bayonet Charge Flashcards
(11 cards)
what was the context for Bayonet charge ?
- Hughes grew up in a postwar era and saw its influence
- rural upbringing is evident in his poetry, focuses on animals
- studied mythology which is shown in the image of the yellow hare
- studied anthropology, shows the poems fixation on instinctual behavior
- greatly influenced by WW1 + WW2, poem was set in WW1 the poem was a way to make sense of the events he never saw but whose impacts were seen daily
- Hughes father was in WW1 1 of 17 to survive, Hughes wanted to display to brutality of war as a tribute to his father’s suffering and to memorialize war as warning to future generations
what was the perspective of bayonet charge and how was it used for effect ?
- Third person singular narration creates a limited perspective, forcing the reader to focus on the personal, psychological impact of war on one individual rather than glorified collective heroism.
- The individual focus strips away nationalistic ideals, exposing how war, though honourable in theory, results in intense emotional and physical suffering for those who experience it firsthand.
- The poem highlights the isolation of the soldier, presenting him as the only human presence in a barren setting, which reflects his emotional detachment and vulnerability.
- Despite being part of an army, the soldier’s experience is shown as fundamentally solitary, centred on survival and self-preservation, while society later neglects those who return.
- The expected stoicism of soldiers is criticised—while they are told to suppress emotion, the poem reveals the internal turmoil and inability to share those feelings, suggesting emotional suppression is harmful.
- Hughes presents the soldier as desensitised to death, so much so that only nature’s violent force can pierce through his numbness, symbolising how war dehumanises and emotionally damages its victims.
what was the structure for bayonet charge and how was it used for effect ?
- Hughes adopts a chaotic and irregular structure to mirror the confusion, panic, and disorder experienced by the soldier during war.
- Enjambment and caesura reflect the disjointed, unstable thought processes of the protagonist, as if his mind is fragmented under pressure.
- The poem transitions from action to introspection, symbolising the soldier’s mental shift from external warfare to internal psychological conflict.
- Hughes deliberately breaks the conventional stanza structure to reject order, echoing the soldier’s fractured state and the lack of control in the battlefield.
- The overall effect is to make the reader feel disoriented and overwhelmed, replicating the soldier’s emotional and sensory overload.
what was the opening and the effect for bayonet charge ?
- The poem opens in medias res (“Suddenly he awoke”), immersing the reader into the immediate chaos and disorientation of the soldier’s experience.
- Hughes strips away clarity by using confusing and erratic syntax, mimicking the soldier’s muddled perception and uncertainty.
- Vivid imagery such as “raw in raw-seamed hot khaki” emphasises discomfort and physical suffering, grounding the poem in harsh realism.
- The repeated line “He lugged a rifle numb as a smashed arm” uses a disturbing simile to convey both emotional detachment and physical burden.
- This disorienting beginning reflects the soldier’s loss of purpose, revealing his lack of understanding or control over his actions in war.
‘Patriotic tear’ - reality of war - bayonet charge
- came to war out of a sense of duty to protect his country
- illusion of the honour + pride in fighting, only when at the frontline the effects of propaganda wears off and true horror is realized
- patriotism leaving as he now knows the reality of war
what are the quotes and analysis of the semantic field of body parts and violence ? -bayonet charge
- blurs line between what is human and what is a weapon, allows Hughes to suggest that humans are used as a weapon of war
- ‘Lugged’- implies he is not physically adept enough to carry, unprepared for the physical toll of war
- ‘Smacking’- aggression and violence - targeted at nature
- ‘Statuary’- like a statue - frozen in fear
- ‘blending of body and weapon’
‘lugged a rifle as numb as a smashed arm’- bayonet charge
- Simile
- portrays the soldier as unprepared for war and unsuitable for his role by using a simile to liken his rifle to a smashed arm
- implies that the soldier seems disconnected from his weapon and uncomfortable holding it, showing his
physical unsuitability for his role. - rifle is presented to be numb and cold showing how unnatural the soldier deems committing acts of violence.
- six similes used in the poem, implying that there is no way for Hughes to accurately describe what war is like.
- As Hughes has no first hand experience of war, the only way he can describe it is to compare it to his own personal
experiences.
‘sweating molten iron from the centre of his chest’ - Reality of war - bayonet charge
- shows how the patriotism he previously held in his heart leaves from the centre of his chest.
-idea of sweating molten iron has painful connotations showing how the soldier is physically pained by the realisation that his ideals have been disproven. - “his sweat heavy” shows how it is increasingly harder to fight once disillusioned and without patriotic motivation.
‘King, honour, human dignity etcetera ‘ - Reality of war - bayonet charge
- asyndetic listing
- shows how the soldier gains honour from fighting for his king and country
- represents traditional patriotic values soldiers are taught to fight for—nationalism, pride, and noble sacrifice.
- disillusionment, as in the chaos of battle, such abstract concepts offer no comfort or motivation
- Hughes critiques how these lofty ideals are often used as propaganda to recruit soldiers, masking the brutal reality they will actually face.
- The phrase highlights the soldier’s mental shift: he no longer believes in what he was taught to value
‘bullets smacking the belly out of air’ - bayonet charge
- nature seen as victim of war
- ‘smacking’- active verb - demonstrate violence inflicted on air
- ‘bullets’ ‘bully’ - plosive sound
- ‘belly’- personification of air - reader has sympathy for the effect of war on nature
tell me about the hare in bayonet charge ? (Quotes, analysis)
- symbol- represents soldiers collective suffering
- projects violence of war onto an innocent animal caught up in war
- ’ threshing circle’ ‘mouth wide,open silent’ - suffering of humans soldiers are immune to, new type of suffering by an animal affects them
- hares suffering associated with the suffering just as a human
- just as an animal, humans in war resort to animal instincts