Hanging Essay Points Flashcards
(8 cards)
What should be in your head during the introduction
Techniques: STANCE, SYMBOLISM, CONTRAST, SETTING, LANGUAGE
Mention Orwell’s experience as an officer in Burma 1920 and his stance
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What should points should you cover in body 1?
Techniques: Setting, Pathetic fallacy, Imagery
Setting = bleak, uneasy, unnatural
Creates unease, discomfort which mirrors harshness of execution
Dehumanises prisoners to gain sympathy from the reader
Highlights unfair treatment which links to Orwell’s stance
What points are covered in body 2?
Techniques: Word choice, Comparison
“Puny wisp” = malnourished, weak, almost invisible
“ Puny” = small and fragile
“Wisp” = faint, ghost-like — prisoner is no threat
Contrast between fragile man and heavy guard presence
Creates sympathy and questions justice
What points should you cover in body 3
Techniques: Symbolism, Contrast
Dog symbolises natural innocence — does not judge
Reinforces equality: the dog doesn’t see the prisoner as a criminal
Contrast with guards who are controlled by fear and duty
Orwell uses this to challenge the moral authority of the executiontions.
What points are covered in body 4
Techniques: Symbolism, Word choice
Prisoner avoids puddle — still values comfort = still human
Suggests awareness, dignity, and a will to live
Highlights how much life he still has — Orwell questions the morality of ending it
Orwell begins to reflect more deeply on what the execution means
What points are covered in body 5?
Quote 1: Cries to God — repetition = hopelessness, vulnerability
Still religious — evokes more sympathy
Quote 2: cold, urgent, and dehumanising
“Abominable noise” reduces man’s final cry to an annoyance
they want it over, not because it’s wrong, but because it’s uncomfortable
Orwell uses this to criticise how the law strips away empathy
What points for body 6
Point: concludes text and views by describing unusual aftermath
Quote 1: lighthearted atmosphere after death — disturbing lack of remorse or coping mechanism
Quote 2: Contrast of jovial mood with nearby dead man emphasizes point on capital punishment
What points in conclusion
TARTY
Orwell shows execution is inhumane, unjust, and devalues life
Emphasises equality — death should not be decided by others
Final message: capital punishment strips away humanity and is morally wrong and every life is equal