Telephone Call By Fleur Adcock Flashcards
(6 cards)
They asked me ‘Are you sitting down?
Right? This is Universal Lotteries,’
they said. ‘You’ve won the top prize,
the Ultra-super Global Special.
What would you do with a million pounds?
Or, actually, with more than a million—
not that it makes a lot of difference
once you’re a millionaire.’ And they laughed.
Establishes sense of excitement
“Universal Lotteries” - sounds grand yet vague, hinting at something too good to be true
“Ultra-super Global Special” - exaggeration feels almost comically excessive, hinting at absurdity of situation
“More than a million” - further inflates promise
‘Are you OK?’ they asked—’Still there?
Come on, now, tell us, how does it feel?’
I said ‘I just . . . I can’t believe it!’
They said ‘That’s what they all say.
What else? Go on, tell us about it.’
I said ‘I feel the top of my head
has floated off, out through the window,
revolving like a flying saucer.’
First lines - push for emotional response; gives a sense of mocking
Ellipsis: shows disbelief both in excitement and skepticism
Metaphor in last three lines: shows how his worries dissappear with money - shows vulnerability and easy manipulation of people - conveys empathy
Simile: “ like a flying saucer” - humourosly conveys shock but conveys a sense of surrealness and unseriousness
‘That’s unusual,’ they said. ‘Go on.’
I said ‘I’m finding it hard to talk.
My throat’s gone dry, my nose is tingling.
I think I’m going to sneeze—or cry.’
‘That’s right,’ they said, ‘don’t be ashamed
of giving way to your emotions.
It isn’t every day you hear
you’re going to get a million pounds.
Physical reactions to the news - gives sense of empathy as he takes it very seriously + shows his puzzled state and diverse emotions: “sneeze” “cry”
“Thats right” etc. - manipulative tone - conveys empathy towards writer
Relax, now, have a little cry;
we’ll give you a moment . . .’ ‘Hang on!’ I said.
‘I haven’t bought a lottery ticket
for years and years. And what did you say
the company’s called?’ They laughed again.
‘Not to worry about a ticket.
We’re Universal. We operate
a Retrospective Chances Module.
“Now, have a little cry” - makes it personal and emotional
Ellipsis: Speaker finally starts questioning call; leads to shift in tone
Nearly everyone’s bought a ticket
in some lottery or another,
once at least. We buy up the files,
feed the names into our computer,
and see who the lucky person is.’
‘Well, that’s incredible,’ I said.
‘It’s marvellous. I still can’t quite . . .
I’ll believe it when I see the cheque.’
Caesura: at the end emphasises sense of shock - doesn’t fully believe it
Ellipsis: reinforces the doubting of the call, but wants to believe it
‘Oh,’ they said, ‘there is no cheque.’
‘But the money?’ ‘We don’t deal in money.
Experiences are what we deal in.
You’ve had a great experience, right?
Exciting? Something you’ll remember?
That’s your prize. So congratulations
from all of us at Universal.
Have a nice day!’ And the line went dead.
“But the money?” - lack of excitement and puzzlement
Interogatory language - shows the narrator let down / in shock
“And the line went dead” - symbolic of narrators hopes
Lack of judgement - extreme shock + dissapointment
Adcock teaches that money isn’t the real prize, but the emotions we feel - we should enjoy life