criteria

Question 1

I have written a clear introudction and conclusion to my response - in his modern morality play

Answer 1

priestly clealry presents…ultimatejly it can be seen that

Question 2

i have tracked the character or theme cacross the whole of the play using structural terms: ]

Answer 2

establishment, outset, crisis, conflict, climatic, denoucement, cliff hanger, twist

Question 3

I hav incorpoated an anlysis of the extract into my response

Question 4

i have included between 15 quotations on the character of theme in my reponse and 20 embedded quotes

Question 5

i have employed quotations from oth the extract and the whole play

Question 6

i have used accurate terminology to explore the language and techniques employed by stevensn-

Answer 6

symbolism, metaphor, simile, imagery, noun phrase, verb phrase

Question 7

i have used appropriate terms to expore the form of the play

Answer 7

stage directions, dialogue, staging, characcter interaction, dramatic irony, audience, dramatix tension

Question 8

i have used appropriate verbs to evoke what prislty is doing as a writier

Answer 8

portrays, conveys, depicts, highlights, evokes

Question 9

i have used adjectives and adverbs to evaluate the effects and the writer’s techniques, Priestley

Answer 9

Sheila’s impassioned plea, the powerful metaphor, priestley skillfuly conveys

Question 10

i have written clealry and accurately in my resonse ensuring correct spelling of characters’ and the writer’s names, capital letters for bames, acts and at the beginning of the sentences, clearly coherrent sentences which mske sense

Answer 10

SPAG

Question 11

total marks

Answer 11

35+5

Question 12

29-35 marks band 5 part 1

Answer 12

candidates focus on the task. including overview, convey ideas with consistent coherence and use an appropriate register, uses a sensitive and evaluative approach in the task and analyse the extract and wider text cirtically, show a perceptive understanding of the extracted wider text, engaging fully, perhaps with some originality, in their personal response, their responses include pertinent, direct references from across the etract and wider text, including quotations

Question 13

29-35 band 5 part 2

Answer 13

candidates
analys and apprpriate writerls use of language, form, and structure, make assured reference to meanings and effects, exploring and evluating the way meaning and ideas are conveyed trhough the language structure and form:
use precise subject therminolog in an appropriate context