a game of headless polo Flashcards
(34 cards)
We drove off to find the best viewing spot.
Opens in middle of action to show sense of spontaneity and suddenness that will be a theme for passage and create sense of confusion.
Wacky Races.
Metaphor demonstrating craziness and desire to win and not care about rules.
‘We’ll open the car boot, you climb inside and point your camera towards the race. As the donkeys overtake us, we’ll join the cars.’
Direct speech showing Desire and Lack of Anxiety and Risky nature/lack of health and safety.
But will you try and get to the front?’
Question showing bravery/excitement/foolhardiness of writer.
We waited for eternity on the brow of the hill.
Exaggeration to emphasise boredom.
Nearly one hour later I was beginning to feel rather silly when the only action was a villager on a wobbly bicycle, who nearly fell off as he cycled past and gazed around at us.
Humorous image juxtaposes what was expected.
I was beginning to lose faith in its happening, but the lads remained confident.
Contrast in perspective demonstrates laid back culture and not running to schedule
‘Are they coming?’ we called out to them. ‘Coming, coming,’ came the reply.
Repetition creates sense of anticipation.
The two donkeys were almost dwarfed by their entourage
alliteration and contrasting image used for comedic effect.
the Kibla donkey is said to achieve speeds of up to 40 kph
fact to emphasise danger of speed.
we spotted two approaching donkey-carts in front of a cloud of fumes and dust created by some fifty vehicles roaring up in their wake.
Sensory language helps reveal what race looked like/ hard to see. The personification suggests the race takes a mind of its own
perched
Repetitive use of this word conveys precarious and dangerous situation/position people were in.
energetically, although not cruelly.
Adverbs to illustrate the jockeys actions more vividly.
The noise of the approaching vehicles grew; horns tooting, bells ringing, and the special rattles used just for this purpose (like maracas, a metal container filled with dried beans).
Listing of noises show how loud and crazy the atmosphere must have been with all this happening at once.
Men standing on top of their cars and vans, hanging out of taxis and perched on lorries, all cheered and shouted, while the vehicles jostled to get to the front of the convoy
Imagery to portray the care-free attitude and danger, but excitement and joy of the race behind the race.
swerve
Use of this word helps reveal danger as it has connotations of moving quickly and with a lack of complete control.
Formula One without rules
Metaphor showing speed and danger
a city-centre rush hour gone anarchic
Metaphor meaning very busy and so depicting the craziness of the situation.
survival of the fittest
Metaphor comparing the race to the theory of evolution and how only the strong will be able to cope and stay alive.
the ability to cut in front of a vehicle with a sharp flick of the steering wheel (no lane discipline here); quick reflexes to spot a gap in the traffic for a couple of seconds; nerves of steel, and an effective horn
Listing of required skills in order to reveal what is needed for the race and sensory language to convey the danger, but also humour of what driver’s had to do.
oncoming traffic — for it was a main road — had to dive into the ditch and wait there until we had passed
Fact/anecdote in an aside to show how ridiculous and comical the event was for other people not involved, but also potentially dangerous.
Yaqoob loved it.
short sentence to emphasise enjoyment of experience.
his hand permanently on the horn and his language growing more colourful with every vehicle that tried to cut in front
sensory language to reveal comedy of situation and increasing anger of the driver
just as they were reaching the finishing line, the hospital gate, there was a near pile-up
ironic use of somewhere that should be for the injured being use in something that could cause injury.