poems Flashcards
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Cozy Apologia: designated relationships poem
In Cozy Apologia, Dove takes us on a journey through her views on love and reflects on her relationship as time passes and she grows up and experiences more. She tells us about her dreaming of a knight in shining armour to her teenage experiences to finally finding love and being embarrassed that it isn’t at all what she expected. It’s mundane and she wonders if that’s ok, and decides that it is and accepts her content in her relationship. Dove could perhaps be trying to highlight the reality of love compared to media and the representations of love in the post-modern age, this would really resonate with a younger audience who would still be inexperienced and could benefit from reading a poem like this. As a reader, I believe Dove wrote this poem not only for Fred but for her younger self because she’s been in that position and perhaps if someone had explained the truth behind committed relationships she wouldn’t have had to go on that journey alone.
my pen exudes
By comparing Fred to a ‘pen’, Rita is saying their love is ordinary, unromantic and overall not risky. Fred is reliable and loyal but he isn’t exciting because he’s always there
drying matte
image of how relationships change over time
silver stirrups…chain mail glinting
These images allude to Dove comparing Fred to a knight in shining armour, and this jump from ordinary objects to a knight is quite big, however with Dove setting up these different images of masculinity perhaps she’s alluding to her assumptions about romance as a child being true but also not exactly what you’d expect as Fred’s there to save her from domestic, ordinary distress but he’s also there to rescue her form this unnamed danger, possibly a metaphorical dragon, similar to the enemies of medieval knights
Big Bad Floyd
After Big Bad Floyd (a hurricane), is mentioned, the rhyme scheme no longer follows a pattern, and immediately the reader is aware that this is the ‘enemy’ that is referred to in the first stanza. He is Fred’s nemesis. Hurricanes and Big Bad Floyd especially is strong, powerful, destructive, dangerous and this prospect of that danger is alluring and exciting to Dove, this is an image of that toxic masculinity which hurt Dove all those years ago, that she reflects on. This is why Big Bad Floyd is Fred’s nemesis; he is destructive and therefore poses a threat to Dove’s sanity and their relationship
teenage crushes on worthless boys
the adjective ‘worthless’ devalues the boys, emphasizing their insignificance and highlighting the speaker’s emotional growth. This shift from idealized to realistic love reflects the transition from shallow, fleeting emotions to a more meaningful adult relationship. The tone of regret and the imagery of past infatuations show the Dove’s reflections starting to evolve as they critique youthful infatuations
sweet with a dark and hollow center
It uses an oxymoron to create a contrast between surface sweetness and underlying emptiness. The adjective “sweet” suggests warmth or pleasantness, while “dark and hollow” introduces a sense of emptiness or deception, revealing the emotional complexity that Dove was exposed to as a teenager which helps to build up to the conclusion of her reflection.
we’re content, but fall short of the Divine
happy enough BUT not perfect something missing, exciting relationship out somewhere else
an attraction in Dove to Floyd (dragon), Floyd’s got this god-like power which is exciting/stimulating BUT dangerously difficult to her
she just has this tendency to feel that security and reliability of the relationship with Fred lacks something exciting which is represented by dominating/powerful Floyd
melancholy (call it blues)
melancholy is sadness, she has a depressive personality and this tendency to fall into depressive episodes, emphasised by a reference to ‘blues’ the music of suffering, she understands what might trigger these depressive episodes and this emptiness and so
nothing else will do…with you
Despite feeling of unsatisfaction, she comes to terms with the fact that the cosiness Fred provides for her is only thing that saves her and keeps her sane, if she were to abandon it for the flame (Floyd) then the wave of depression would crush her, so engaging in that flame is a danger, and with this final understanding, she restores the beauty of reliable love with a final couplet, it’s not everything she had originally dreamed of, but through her experiences as a teenager, and her new-found understanding through this reflection, she’s content, and she’s ok with that
Cozy Apologia structure
1st stanza, perfect rhyming couplets
2nd stanza, shaken up rhyme scheme by Big Bad Floyd
3rd stanza, rhyme scheme straightens up and ends with a perfect rhyming couplet (acceptance)
Dulce et Decorum Est: designated war poem
In Dulce et Decorum Est, Owen criticises the glorification by revealing the harsh and grotesque reality of war: the physical suffering, the traumatic gas attacks and the ever-lasting consequences on the soldiers’ mental health, to ultimately refute the propaganda that has sent thousands of young men to their futile death. As someone who served on the front lines himself, Owen probably held resentment for propaganda poets such as Jessie Pope, who promoted young boys going off to war, because no one knew the truth behind it all, this poem is to warn and is a raw expression of Owen’s pain and anger towards society for allowing him to enlist.
The Manhunt: predicted poem
In The Manhunt, Armitage explores how war has affected the relationship between Laura and Eddie. Armitage presents us with this journey that the couple go on in order to salvage their relationship. In the beginning, Laura describes her husband’s state right after the war, before she begins to try and understand the physical damage and eventually the mental damage (PTSD) her husband has. With this new-found understanding, Armitage presents us perhaps with a glimpse of what Laura understands but eventually she accepts the manhunt will never end.
the frozen river
Ostensibly, the ‘frozen river’ is a metaphor symbolic of Eddie’s scars and wounds across his face, however on a deeper level, ‘frozen river’ could refer to his emotions being stuck and unable to flow (similar to a river) whilst he battles with his PTSD.
he let me explore
Explore is an interesting choice of verb because it suggests this is something unknown to Laura, she is discovering things about her partner as she continues on her journey across his scars. The war has impacted Eddie so much that his own wife doesn’t know who he is anymore however she has enough love to remain patient and loyal and find out how Eddie has changed.
blown hinges
Blown hinge is the first clearly violent image in the poem - a turning point with connotations of pain, damage yet fragility. Also emphasises how broken Eddie’s experiences of war have left him.
fractured rudder
The fact that his body part is compared To a rudder which is used to navigate/direct/steer A ship could suggest that he is unable to navigate his own mind anymore. He is unable to have control over his own body ergo the war has rendered him so helpless and vulnerable.
punctured lung
Eddie is confirmed to a fragile Material, Silk Emphasising how broken the war has left him, - ostensibly a punctured lung is a grotesque image which only scratches the surface of the terrors. Eddie was put through during the Bosnian war however under the surface a punctured lung could refer to the fact that not only could not breathe physically but he could not breathe mentally his PTSD has flooded him with these nightmares and memories and flashbacks that he is overwhelmed. He is struggling to breathe under all the symptoms of his disorder.
climb the rungs
Eddie’s ribs are compared to the rungs of a ladder. climbing a ladder specially a long one can be a strenuous task the fact that Eddie‘s ribs are referred to as a ladder can suggest that repairing him can be a strenuous or daunting task to Laura and her mental state. Also, Laura uses this ladder to reach to Eddie’s heart therefore by Laura tending to his physical wounds, is Laura able to comprehend his emotional wounds.
skirting along
Quite light and casual in tone suggesting that loving Eddie comes easily perhaps even naturally to Laura: that understanding his trauma is not a chore for her however skirting means to go along the edge of something, creating the sense of precariousness, or rather ‘walking on eggshells’ as to not trigger a flashback. This light tone somewhat normalises Eddie’s PTSD and shows how Laura is used to it and used to how dangerous it can be. Alternatively, it could be that Laura is dancing around the edge and hasn’t yet been fully exposed to the pure breadth and extent of Eddie’s trauma.
foetus of metal
Foetus of metal is a metaphor where the bullet Eddie was shot by has been compared to a baby. Armitage could be trying to express here that like a baby, PTSD is a life changing event, this extended metaphor could show how war has infantilised Eddie, and now Laura has to look after him as he is no longer able to function normally in the everyday world. It’s also ironic because of the juxtaposition between the connotations of life in ‘foetus’ and the events that have occurred; a foetus signals the start of a new life, but this foetus ended Eddie’s life as he knew it
back to its source
This refers to the physical journey of the bullet which is described throughout the poem, but also refers to the mental trauma he had endured, and the source of that trauma is the bullet from the war. This links to the next line.
unexploded mine
A mine is a military weapon that can explode at anytime, but here it is used as the distress of a soldier which causes him to struggle and sweat with effort. It’s significant that it is deep inside his mind, as his wife must reach there, but she’s aware and cautious that any wrong move may cause an explosion of emotion/trigger his PTSD
only then, did I come close
The imperfect rhyme, ‘close’ and ‘closed’ is a muted ending, the problem is not solved but she still came close to solving it. This shows that the damages that the war caused permanently affects and damages people, not just the soldiers but the families of them too. It suggests she will never fully understand or help her husband, and hasn’t yet found a cure or solution, which brings the title into context as the manhunt hasn’t concluded and will continue into the future.