Red Book of Common Error 2 Flashcards
112.✗He plays good than I.
He plays better than I.CThe comparative degree of ‘well’ is ‘better’.
113.✗Hardly I have had any rest since one week.
Hardly have I had any rest for a week.CWhen a sentence begins with ‘hardly’, the first auxiliary of the verb follows it.
114.✗Really speaking it is not hot.
As a matter of fact it is not hot. To speak the truth it is not hot. In truth it is not hot. In fact it is not hot.C’Really’ means ‘in actual fact’, and is not appropriate in this sentence.
115.✗He was very kind enough to invite me.
He was so kind as to invite me. He was kind enough to invite me.CBoth ‘very’ and ‘enough’ cannot be used as the modified of the same adjective.
116.✗To tell in brief.
In short; in brief.C As ‘in brief’ is used to sum up what is being said, ‘to tell’ is superfluous.
117.✗If he fails he will be nowhere.
If he fails he will get into great trouble. If he fails he will be ruined.C’Nowhere’ means ‘not in any place’ and is inappropriate here.
118.✗Just I had gone when he came.
I had just gone when he came.CAs an adverb ‘just’ comes immediately before the main verb.
119.✗Never I have seen such a sight.
Never have I seen such a sight.CIf ‘never’ occurs at the beginning of a sentence, it is followed by an auxiliary verb.
120.✗It is a very good film; I liked it on the whole.
It is a very good film; I liked the whole of it.C’On the whole’ is used to sum up your opinion of something which is good and bad in parts. For instance, ‘The photography of the film was bad but the plot was exciting. On the whole I enjoyed it.
121.’✗Though he is fat yet he runs fast.
Though he is fat, he runs fast.C’Though’ is the conjunction and a second conjunction—’but’, ‘yet’ or ‘still’ is not required.
2.✗If he is fat then he will run slowly.
If he is fat, he will run slowly.CIn a conditional clause, the consequent clause need not have ‘then’.
3.✗As I fired at the tiger at that time he shook my arm.
As I fired at the tiger, he shook my arm.CThe first clause refers to a point of time, its repetition (at that time) is redundant.
4.✗Because he is clever therefore (or so) he gets good marks.
Because he is clever, he gets good marks.CIn a cause-effect sentence, if the cause is indicated by ‘because’, the result clause does not need ‘therefore’.
5.✗He did not come to school. Because he was ill.
He did not come to school because he was ill.CThe clause that indicates the cause cannot be separated from the clause that indicates its effect.
6.✗No sooner I had spoken, than he left.
No sooner had I spoken than he left.CJust like ‘never’, if a sentence begins with ‘no sooner’, the auxiliary precedes the subject.
7.✗I have bought many fireworks as rockets and etc.
I have bought many fireworks, such as rockets.CIt would be good if that overworked Latin abbreviation ‘etc.’ was forbidden in all composition.
8.✗I want to know as to why I have been detained.
I want to know why I have been detained.CIn modern English ‘as to’ is not needed to connect a clause with the main clause.
9.✗This is my friend, he was at school with me.
This is my friend who was at school with me.C ‘Who’ is needed if the relative clause is attached to the noun phrase ‘my friend’.
10.✗This is my servant, I was telling you about him.
This is my servant about whom I was telling you.CAs the second clause is a relative clause, it must be attached by ‘who’ (or ‘that’) to the noun phrase ‘my servant
11.✗Supposing if he fails, what will he do?
Supposing he fails what will he do? If he fails what will he do?CAs supposing and if have the same function, only one of them should be used.
12.✗Until he does not try, he must be punished.
He must be punished until he tries. He must be punished so long as he does not try.CUntil, means ‘up to the point in time or the event mentioned.’ It is normally used in the beginning of the clause.
13.✗Not only he will go, but also he will remain there.
Not only will he go, but he will also remain there.CLike ‘never’ and ‘no sooner’, ‘not only’ attracts the auxiliary verb to its immediate right if it occurs in the beginning of a sentence.
14.✗He neither comes nor he writes.
Neither does he come nor does he write.C’He neither comes nor he writes’ is equally correct and probably more common. But rule that when the first word of the sentence is a negative the auxiliary verb must be inverted, as in a direct question.
15.✗I am fond of all games as for an example cricket.
I am fond of all games, for example, cricket.C’As’ is redundant here because we don’t need a conjunction.