walking away Flashcards
cecil day lewis (16 cards)
CONTEXT
- his mother died young whihc could explain the emphasis he places on the father-son relationship
STRUCTURE - rhyme scheme?
- conisistent rhyme scheme and consitnetly in quintetes (5 lines)
-> reflects staediness of father and control he used to have and still wants to have on son
-» why it is so hard for his to let go
-> contrasts the theme of change and individual development within the poem
STRUCTURE - ending?
- conlucsive ending
-> father has learnt to partially let fo and accept the change - ((moral message type thing))
STRUCTURE - enjambment and caesura effects
- challenge father’s control
STRUCTURE - enjabment and caesura quotes
- enjambement = “wrenched from its orbit go drifting away // behind a scatter of boys.”
- caesura = “behind the scatter of boys.”
STRUCTURE - repetition of away
- every single stanza
- continues the theme of separation and development in the father son relationship as son is growing up and leaving home and school
LANGUAGE - “leaves just turning”
- autumn
- transsissions son’s life as he enters new season
-> causes pain for father
-» the ((autmnal)) leaves dying and dropping off reflects the speakers sense of loss and pain - natural imagery
-> speaker understands it is a natural thing to do and is ordained by life
-> but it is painfual for him
LANGUAGE - simile “like a satellite // wrenched from its obrit go drifting away”
in the beginning =
- the man made object contrasts lots of natural imagery
- the satellite is meant to orbit so something has gone wrong for it to be “wrneched from its orbit”
((- the satellite is father))
- enjambement here which not only wrneched sentance apart (reflecting sateliitel) but symbolsies how th efather and son are being wrenched apart
LANGUAGE “a half-fledged thing set free”
- natural imagery
- bird
- “half” - adjective
-> speaker doesn;t feel like his son is ready - “set free” - relecutance that emphasises that son didn’t want to let himg go
LANGUAGE - like a winged seed loosened from its parent stem”
- “winged” - adjective
-> meant to leave - contrasts satellite which is meant to stay
-» a shift to acceptancee (kinda) - “loosened” - verb
-> softer verb = father coming to terms more
-» contrasts the aggressive “wrneched” - image that father has less control over son
LANGUAGE - “the scorching ordeals which fire one’s irresolute clay”
- “CLAY”
-> image of humans being malleable things changed by the environments they are subjected to throughout their childhood
-» painful events can be permaament and leave fixed marks on a person
LANGUAGE - religious reference
- “saying what God alone could perfectly show”
-> sacred imagery (poem goes from natural to sacred)
-> godly, morally right thing is to let go - conclusion speaker reached to was inevitable
MEANING - final stanza (tone)
- reflective tone
- enjambement shows the thought takes up more than one line in the speaker’s memory
MEANING
- thinking back to son’s first day of schooln
- change in relationship over time - sacrifical nature of parental love
- he didn’t want to let go of son
LANGUAGE - seasons
- poet references seasonal changes to compare to changes experienced with son
LANGUAGE - address
- direct language such as “i wacthed you” and “you walking away” which ceases in last 2 stanzas as he becomes more reflective and contemplative
- this shift mirrors the separation