Adv Rhetoric Flashcards
Repeated Subjects II
Those examples involve changes in the subject of the sentence. Here is the same idea with the change made in the object.
Baker speech in the senate 1861
“They will have their courts still, they will have their ballot boxes still, they will have their elections still, they will have their representatives upon this floor. Still, they will have taxation and representation still, they will have the writ of habeas corpus still, they will have every privilege they ever had. And all we desire.”
The general effect in all the cases just seeing is similar. The differences between the examples are made subordinate to the points they have in common. That last passage could as easily, probably more easily have been written by putting still closer to the middle of each clause, they will still have etc. pushing it to the end lends the word more weight and makes the statements seem more completely parallel. And think a bit about the sound of the word accented syllable ending with a liquid consonant.
Repeated Subjects III
Repeated Subjects III
These constructions also tend to give the modifiers more power than they would have had if strung on a list. When most of the words in each clause are the same. The stress in reading or speaking them falls hard on the changed adjective
Dickens hard times 1854.
I’ll stick to the fact of it to you. It’s the pleasantest work there is and it’s the lightest work there is. And it’s the best paid work there is.
Lloyd George international honor 1914
I believe in spite of recent events, there is a greater store of kindness in the German peasant, as in any peasant in the world, but he has been drilled into a false idea of civilization, efficiency, capability. It is a hard civilization. It is a selfish civilization. It is a material civilization.
The same theme is useful for comparing the same two things in different respects.
Dickens hard times 1854 I am a donkey is what I am. I am as obstinate as one. I am more stupid than one. I get as much pleasure as one. And I should like to kick like one.
Repeated Subjects IV
Changes of the verb as when describing the same person doing or not doing different things in the same way.
First Corinthians chapter 13, verse 11. When I was a child, I spake as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child, but when I became a man, I put away childish things. She’ll speech in the
Webster argument in trustees of Dartmouth College versus Woodward 1818.
The legislature shall pass no act directly and manifestly impairing private property and private privileges. It shall not judge by act, it shall not decide by act, it shall not deprive by act, but it shall leave all these things to be tried and adjudged by the law of the land.
Repeated Subjects IV
The repetition of the verbal pattern matches the claim that seemingly different acts serve the same purpose.
Gratton speech in the Irish Parliament 1790
There is an agreement that the boards of accounts and stamps should be united, that agreement they violated. There is an agreement that the revenue board should be confined to seven commissioners, that agreement they violate, there is a king’s letter declaring that the salaries of the ordinance shall be reduced that declaration they violate. There are principles and law against the sale of honors, those principles and law they have violated
Gratton speech in the House of Commons 1815 Bonaparte
It seems, is to reconcile everything by the gift of a free constitution. He took possession of Holland, he did not give her a free constitution. He took possession of Spain, he did not give her a free constitution. He took possession of Switzerland, whose independence he had guaranteed. He did not give her a free constitution. He took possession of Italy, he did not give her a free constitution, he took possession of France. He did not give her a free constitution. On the contrary, he destroyed the directorial constitution. He destroyed the consular constitution, and he destroyed the late constitution formed on the plan of England.
Repeated Lengthening
As with all other figures of repetition, the impact of simplicity often is increased when it is combined with the variety and the length or rhythm of the phrases involved. One possibility familiar from earlier chapters is to lengthen the last section. The repetition at the start and end continues but the structure is varied.
Much Ado About Nothing. Act 4 scene one.
Oh what men dead do what men may do what men daily do not knowing what they do. In this last case, two types of variety are introduced in the last part a longer syllable, daily instead of dare and may and a longer separation between what men and the last word of the sentence. Both changes gently disrupt the expectations that the first two rounds of repetition had created.
Pet speech in the House of Commons 1742
Is not the maintaining so numerous an army and time of peace to be condemned is not the fitting out so many expensive and useless squadrons to be condemned are not the encroachments made upon the sinking fund, the reviving the salt duty, the rejecting many useful bills and motions in Parliament, and many other domestic measures to be condemned.
By the time the third sentence arrives here, the listener has learned how the end of the pattern goes, so the speaker can afford to stack up more examples before getting there, postponing the conclusion in this way makes it more climactic. This passage also illustrates a useful bit of technique in working with semplici repeating the same grammatical structure within the middle part, even as the words change. Here the use of Jenkins mostly repeats, the maintaining the fitting out the reviving the rejecting. This helps to sustain the sense of parallelism, especially when there is some distance between the repeated words at the beginning and end of each sentence.
Repetition Abandonment
Also repetition can be abandoned entirely and to good effect after it has conditioned the listeners expectations. We saw some examples in passing earlier in the chapter. Here are a few others.
Webster argument in the murder trial of john Francis Knapp 1830
He was there before the murder. He was there after the murder. He was there clandestinely unwilling to be seen.
Gratton speech in the Irish Parliament 1790
There is nothing in the way of your liberty except your own corruption and pusillanimity and nothing can prevent your being free except yourselves. It is not in the disposition of England. It is not in the interest of England. It is not in our arms.
Chesterton, the crimes of England 1915.
And if this dramatic sociology is indeed to prevail among us, I think some of the broad minded thinkers who concur and its prevalence Oh, something like an apology to many gallant gentlemen whose graves lie with the last battle was fought in the wilderness, men who had the courage to fight for it, the courage to die for it, and above all, the courage to call it by its name.
Notice that in these cases, the repetition is sustained at the start of every clause straight through to the end. The abandonment comes just at the finish of the last part.
Repetition Abandonment II
The device also can be abandoned for a moment somewhere in the middle as here.
Burke argument in the impeachment trial of Warren Hastings 1788. And, as to the man is Mr. Hastings, a man against too much charge of bribery is improbable. Why he owns it. He is a professor of it, he reduces it into scheme and system. He glories in it.
Taking a break from the semplici by ending a sentence with scheme and system avoids monotony, and also gives the harangue a more spontaneous sound. The speaker isn’t trying too hard to hold to a pattern. He is too excited for that. Hastings later said of this speech. for half an hour, I looked at the orator in a reverie of wonder and actually felt myself the most culpable man on earth.
Repeating the ending at the beginning and at the closest
Anadiplosis is the use of the same language at the end of one sentence or clause. And at the start of the next and a B, BC pattern. Probably the most famous example of it comes from a proverb popularized by
Benjamin Franklin in poor Richard’s Almanac, 1758.
For want of a nail, the shoe was lost for want of a shoe, the horse was lost, and for one to the horse, the rider was lost, being overtaken and slain by the enemy, all for want of care about a horseshoe nail.
One chains of causation, as that first example shows, and a discloses is a natural device for describing causal progressions . Each element is repeated once as a result of the prior cause, and then again as cause of the next resolved.
Chains making it situation seem enviable
Romans, Chapter 6, verses 3-5
So, but we glory in tribulations also, knowing that tribulation worketh patience and patience, experience and experience, hope and hope make us not ashamed. Because the love of God is shed abroad in our hearts by the Holy Ghost which is given unto us.
The repeated elements make the links in the chain seem more secure and perhaps more inevitable. They strengthen the sense that one thing leads to another as you like it,
O’Connell speech in the House of Commons 1831.
One party then was armed against the other the armed party grew insolent insolence led to scuffles and scuffles ended in death.
James Washington Square 1881.
If she stands up for him on account of the money, she will be a humbug. If she is a humbug, I shall see it. If I see it, I won’t waste time with her.
Anadiplosis II
The order can be reversed to so that the pattern becomes result cause result cause as here.
A comedy of errors act 1 scene 2
The meat is cold because you come not home. You come not home because you have no stomach. You have no stomach having broke your fast, but we that know what is too fast and pray Our penitent for your default today.
These patterns can then be abandoned at the end which creates the favorable effects we have seen when considering variety in earlier chapters
Dickens speech at London 1855
It came to pass that they were burned in a stove in the House of Lords, the stove over gorged with these preposterous sticks set fire to the paneling. The paneling set fire to the House of Lords, the House of Lords set fire to the House of Commons, the two houses were reduced to ashes. architects were called in to build others. We are now in the second million of the cost thereof. The National pig is not nearly over the style yet. And the little old woman Britannia hasn’t got home tonight.
Anadiplosis - Two chains of reasoning and a diploma is also may be used to describe chains of reasoning rather than causation.
Much Ado About Nothing. Act five seem to Benedick only foul words and thereupon I will kiss the Beatrice foul words is about foul wind and foul wind is about foul breath and foul breath is noisy. Therefore, I will depart unkissed.
Dickens Little Dorrit 1857.
To think better of it return the gallant landwatch would be to slide a lady to slide a lady it would be to be deficient in chivalry towards the sex and chivalry towards the sex is Part of my character.
Holmes speech at Harvard University 1911.
Man is born a predestined idealist or he is born to act to act is to affirm the worth of an end and to persist in affirming the worth of an end is to make an ideal.
Anadiplosis - Causation
In the example from Holmes and perhaps in all of these cases, the entity poses gives rhetorical backing to an implied form of argument in which the end point is reached through a series of identities. A is B, B is C. So, a is C, a variation on this pattern strings together negatives, one cannot have X without y, one cannot have y without z. So by implication, one cannot have X without Z.
Bao for speech at St. James University 1887.
Society dead or alive and have no charm without intimacy, and no intimacy without interest in trifles which I fear Mr. Harrison would describe it as merely curious.
Wilde, the critic as artists 1891.
Ernest, surely you would admit that the great poems of the early world, the primitive, anonymous collective poems were the result of the imagination of races rather than the imagination of individuals? Gilbert, not when they received a beautiful form, for there is no art where there is no style and no style there is no unity and unity is of the individual.
Anadiplosis - Ascension
Ascension and climax, Anadiplosis is a helpful tool for describing and ascending. Each repetition is accompanied by an increase in the scale of the thing under discussion.
Hamilton speech at New York ratifying convention 1788
We love our families more than our neighbors. We love our neighbors more than our countrymen in general.
Samuel Adams speech at Philadelphia 1776.
The scale of officers from the rapacious and needy Commissioner, to the hottie governor and from the governor with his hungry train, to perhaps a licentious and practical viceroy must be upheld by you and your children.
Anadiplosis - Climax
In elaborate cases, the result of this pattern is climax, a distinct rhetorical figure in which words increase in intensity or scale, until finally reaching some sort of combination. climax and anadiplosis says go well together, as shown in these examples that apply both devices to ascending states of mind.
Richard II, act 5 scene 1
The love of wicked men converts to fear that fear to hate and hate turns one or both to worthy danger and deserve it death.
Dickens Oliver Twist 1838
I know how cold formalities was succeeded by open tones, how indifference gave place to dislike, dislike to hate, and hate to loathing until it last wrenched the clanking bond
Ascension II - Anadiplosis
The repetition at the end of one part and the start of the next helps the reader feel the progress the speaker describes. Both feet come to rest on each stair before stepping to the next one. Anadiplosis also can help along Ascension have a grander kind as when the progression involves nature or religion.
Melville Pierre 1852
Now the quarry discovery is long before the stone cutter and the stone cutter is long before the architect and the architect is long before the Temple of the temple is the crown of the world. Melville Moby Dick 1851
There is No or life in the now, except that rocking life imparted by a gentle rolling ship, by her, borrowed from the sea by the sea from the inscrutable tides of God.
Hamlet, Act 5, scene 2.
And let the kettle to the trumpet speak the trumpet to the cannoneer without the cannons to the heavens, the heaven to earth. Now the king drinks to Hamlet, though less common, and anadiplosis can also be used to walk through a hierarchy in the reverse direction, a descent as shown here. Churchill, the river war 1899 the black jihadi overall the Arab Army in the capital, the army in the capital dominated the forces in the provinces, the forces in the provinces subdued inhabitant, centralization of power was assured by the concentration of military material.
Anadiplosis
For additive closest for emphasis, sometimes, and anadiplosis is not used for any substantive purpose of the kind just shown. The repetition just serves to improve the flow of the exposition, to emphasize the repeated word and often to lend the utterance more feeling.
Henry the IV, part 1 scene 2 act 4
Is he good, but to taste sack and drink it very neat and cleanly, but to carve a coupon and eat it, wearing cutting but in craft, wearing crafty, but in villainy, wearing villainous, but in all things were in worthy, but in nothing,
Melville Mardi 1849
Their men were scourged their crime, a heresy, the heresy that media was no demigod
Webster speech in the senate 1836
the bill therefore was lost. It was lost in the House of Representatives. It died there, and there it’s remains to be found. The passage from Webster is a double case of our current theme. last, last, and there there the repeated use of the device creates a sense of gravity to go with the substance,
Dickens A Tale of Two Cities 1859
The beach was a desert of heaps of sea and stones tumbling by only about the sea did what it liked. What it liked, was destruction. Dickens A Christmas Carol 1843 eyewear chain I forged in life, replied the ghost. I made it link by link and yard by yard. I girded it on my own freewill and of my own freewill. I wore it. It is a useful exercise to mentally rewrite passages as they might have otherwise been composed, and to ask what is gained and lost. This last passage from Dickens could have been written with an era of my own freewill. I girded it on my own freewill. I wore it,I girded it on my own freewill and I wore it of my own freewill.
Anadiplosis - Ephistrophy
Instead, he uses and Anadiplosis to put the repetition on the inside, rather than at the start or finish. This keeps the choices made by the speaker in the more prominent Start and End positions, and so makes them strong while still stressing the common feature they share the free will, which is repeated in succession. And a discloses also creates a different cadence than the other devices on march up the hill and back down again.
The verb phrases tumble out from the repeated middle parts as though by force of gravity, which makes a kind of match with the meaning. That last passage also can be considered a type of key as most of which more in its place.
Anadiplosis with anaphora
Anadiplosis sometimes can be combined handsomely with anaphora. The most common technique moves from one of the devices to the other, the element repeated at the end and start. That is the common word in the anadiplosis is then repeated at the beginning of one or two more segments, creating a case of anaphora and thus varying the form of the repetition.
The Winter’s Tale, act for scene IV
Being none of your flesh and blood, your flesh and blood Have not offended the king and so your flesh and blood is not to be punished by him.
McIntosh speech and the trial of Sean Peltier 1803
That ancient fabric which has been gradually reared by the wisdom and virtue of our fathers still stands. It stands Thanks be to God, solid and entire, but it stands alone, and it stands amid ruins.
Anadiplosis with anaphora II
The anaphora also can come before the anadiplosis, of course, or as
here between two cases of it.
Dickens Nicholas Nickleby 1839
I have no orders, but I have fears, fears that I will express chafe as you may fears that you may be consigning that young lady to something worse than supporting you by the labor of her hands, had she worked herself dead. These are my fears and these fears I found upon your own demeanor.
Repeated + Anaphora
A more exotic variation combines the two devices simultaneously by making the repeated element in the anadiplosis the be in the a BBC pattern itself a small case of anaphora.
Shield argument for the defense in the trial of john O’Connell 1843.
Ireland is not to be ruled by force. Indeed, it is to be ruled through Protestant jurors and Protestant charges and Protestant jailers. But Protestant jurors and Protestant charges and Protestant jailers require that Protestant bayonets should sustain them and that with the discretion of the home office, the energy of the Horse Guards must be combined.
Anaphora - Repetition of the root
Polish towton. For lip to tan means repeating the root of a word with a different ending. One, reciprocity, Polish to time can be used with the active and passive forms of a verb to show how a single action may be done both by one and two, one. Repeating the root of the word ties the wording of a sentence together in a way that suggests the same reciprocity as its substance. Matthew chapter seven verse one, Judge not that ye be not judged.
King Lear Act 3 scene 2
By a man more sinned against than sinning pen,
Some fruits of solitude 1693.
Let the people think they govern, and they will be governed.
Johnson in Boswell’s life 1791
Mrs. Monza you has dropped me. Now, sir, there are people whom one should like very well to drop, but would not wish to be dropped by trollop
Shaw, St. JOHN 1923.
Our Knights are thinking only of the money they will make and ransomes it is not kill or be killed with them. But pay or be paid.
Churchill speech at Manchester 1938.
Evil League of peace seeking peoples is set on not we must convert it into a league of armed peoples, too faithful to molest others, too strong to be molested themselves. To the actor and the act. polyp to turn may be used to refer to the door and the doing of an act, typically by using the same route to build the subject and the verb form. The repetition snugly defines the actor by the act.
Anaphora
Anaphora occurs when the speaker repeats the same words at the start of success of sentences or clauses. This figure is a staple of high style. And so carries with it some risk of cliche.
It gives an utterance the strong ring of oratory Martin Luther King’s I Have a Dream speech is known by that name because those words are repeated at the start of eight sentences in a row, a famous modern instance of anaphora. anaphora generally serves two principal purposes.
Returning to the same words creates a hammering effect. The repeated language is certain to be noticed likely to be remembered and readily conveys strong feeling. Starting sentences with the same words also creates an involving rhythm.
The rhythm may be good in itself and it causes the ear to expect the pattern to continue that expectation can then be satisfied or disrupted in various useful ways. One, repetition of the subject, with changes in the verb. anaphora is helpful for describing different things, all done or to be done by the same subject.
Often it also involves repetition of an auxiliary verb while the main verb changes when used with the active voice in the first person such constructions can produce a sense of inevitability.
Anaphora III
It is appealing to set off the regularity of the anaphora with variety in other respects as when each batch of it differs in the length of its parts from the one before the passage from Stevenson contains good examples. The middle use of it, without hope without help without thanks uses shorter pots than the first under every. And last, still obscurely fighting still clinging in the more common pattern there are two rounds of anaphora, rather than three, The first round consists of longer clauses and the second of short ones
Gratton, speech in the Irish parliament, 1783
user who delight to utter executions against the American commissioners of 1778,
“On account of their hostility to America, user who manufactures stage Thunder against Mr. Eden for his anti American principles user Omid please is to turn to him to the mortal Hamden user approved of the tyranny exercised against America, and you sir voted 4000 Irish troops that cut the throats of the Americans fighting for their freedom, fighting for your freedom, fighting for the great principal liberty, but you found out last, and this should be an eternal lesson to men of your craft and your cunning, that that King had only dishonored you.”
Anaphora IV
The user clauses are the long uses of anaphora and the fighting for clauses are the short ones, the sorts of miniatures we saw under the previous heading. The shorter second round of repetition creates a sense of acceleration and climax. Here is a similar case where anaphora again is used once with long pieces and then twice with short
Orwell 1984.
“It was he who set the gods on to Winston, and who prevented them from killing him. It was he who decided when Winston should scream with pain. When he should have a respite. When he should be fed. When he should sleep. When the drugs should be pumped into his arm. It was he who asked the questions and suggested the answers. He was the tormentor. He was the protector. He was the Inquisitor. He was the friend,
He Uses of anaphora also can be embedded within one another. As in the previous example and as in the next case where the first use of anaphora reduced is suspended in the middle to make room for another power, but is resumed at the end.
Churchill speech in the House of Commons 1938.
“We have been reduced in those five years from a position of security so overwhelming. And so unchallengeable that we never cared to think about it. We have been reduced from a position where the very word war was considered one which would be used only by persons qualifying for a lunatic asylum. We have been reduced from a position of safety and power. How to do good. How to Be generous to beaten fell, how to make terms with Germany, how to give up proper redress for grievances. Oh, just stop arming if we chose, how to take any step in strength or mercy or justice which we thought right reduced in five years from a position safe and unchallenged to where we stand now, or here, where the in came in they all came constructions make way for some shyly some boldly etc. but then are brought back for the finish.”
Dickens A Christmas Carol 1843.
“In came the housemaid with a cousin, the baker. In came the cook with a brother’s particular friend, the milkman. In came the boy from over the way, who was suspected of not having bought enough from his master, trying to hide himself behind the girl from next door but one who was bruised who have had her ears pulled by her mistress. In they all came one after another. Some shyly some boldly some gracefully. Some awkwardly some pushing some pulling in they all came. Anyhow, and every how”