“His terror’s touchy dynamite”
Shows how unstable and explosive fear has made the soldier. He’s dehumanised, almost like a weapon ready to go off.
Metaphor / Alliteration
“He lugged a rifle numb as a smashed arm”
Rifle is described as heavy and useless, like an injury. Suggests war is not glorious — it’s exhausting, painful, and damaging.
Simile
“Sweating like molten iron from the centre of his chest”
Suggests intense fear and adrenaline. Compares the body to a furnace — reflects inner turmoil and how war turns people into machines.
Simile / Imagery